SWOM Trainer’s Solution to “I Can’t Write… So How Can I Be Successful in Internet Marketing?”

First, you need to know about SWOM.com, the business social community you’ve been looking for.

SWOM — short for Super World of Marketing — is a runaway train. And I am “SWOM Trainer.”

For details on my special copywriting critique offer, read all the way to the bottom. It’s not a long page, so please don’t skip the intro. I want this to make sense for you…

What is SWOM? Here’s my review of SWOM on HubPages. Read it, and pay particular attention to the Comments section. You’ll get it.

SWOM.com is Like FaceBook, for Business

Here’s the thumbnail sketch. On SWOM, when you talk about yourself and your business, you can get paid. You earn money for expanding your business contact list.

You get a $15 referral fee for each Gold member you refer, plus 2 extra personal referrals from the system. You receive monthly commissions on 3 levels. And you earn even more money just by making new business contacts in the community and interacting with other Gold members.

• “Yeah, but who’s going to upgrade to Gold on SWOM.com?”
  
• “Why should I pay to use a social networking site?”

This site is different. It’s cleverly set up so that everyone wants to be a Gold member. Believe me, the thing works! It’s a bit long to go into the nitty gritty details here. But once you start exploring inside the SWOM website, you’ll see.

SWOM.com pays you to promote your stuff and find new business partners. Short, sweet and painless.

How much time do you already spend promoting your programs and services online? Are you getting paid to promote yourself?

Now is the time to take a close look at SWOM (especially since we’re still in pre-launch, until March 1st).

And the critique deal? Here it is. If you become a member of SWOM via my SWOM referral link, you’re going to have me breathing down your back… in a good way.

Get a Personalized Copywriting Critique when You Join Me as a SWOM Gold Member

Here’s what will happen. As my personal referral to SWOM, I’ll tell you to go Gold right away, so you don’t lose out on any SWOM earnings. It is easy to make back your $25 monthly fee on SWOM.

And then, I will do a Free Copywriting Critique of your Gold SWOM Profile page.

Good writers have a far higher success rate in online marketing. There’s no denying that! But most people can’t write worth beans, I’m sorry to say.

Typos, poor punctuation and sloppy grammar leave a bad impression. They’re a huge turnoff to potential business partners. Why? People want to connect with success. If you don’t look good, they’re outta there!

To make a living online, you need to have all your ducks in a row.

A key component of your internet presence is your “Who Is” page. Your personal profile page must be memorable. It’s gotta shine!

A Copywriting Critique Means YOU Do the Writing and I Help You Tweak It

I want you to understand I’m not offering you a free ride with this bonus. On the contrary, you’re going to have to work!

I am a trainer. And I want to see you become a better copywriter. For your personal Profile page, I’ll keep you on track until we are both happy with it. I’ll make suggestions, hold your hand, and  even give you remedial grammar exercises if necessary. I want you to have the Aha! moments that will ultimately turn you into a better marketer.

Why? Killer headlines get pages read. Emails with great subject lines get opened. And Profile pages that tell a story get attention right to the bottom. You gotta hook ‘em!

• Sloppy is sloppy!
• Boring is… well, boring.
• Typos and bad grammar? I don’t even want to go there.

• The unusual grabs attention.
• Well written wins.

I can’t promise I’ll turn you into a master copywriter in 5 easy steps. It just doesn’t happen that way.

But I’ll help you improve your writing skills. I’ll let you know when you’re out to lunch. You’ll learn a few things…

And you will end up with a Gold SWOM Profile page that’ll leave others in the dust.

This is over-the-shoulder, hands-on training… Your shoulder…. And your hands.

You will become a student, an apprentice or a grasshopper.  It’s up to you.

Are you going to take action?

SWOM is becoming a vibrant business community at lightning speed. A place where action takers are taking action and creating their own future. I highly recommend you join SWOM with me today.  It is a win-win.  Don’t delay.

But What About Your Referrals… Can They Write?

You might be thinking to yourself that this is a great deal. Yes, it is.

But what about your referrals? Do you think they might need a school marm as well?

I honestly cannot commit to critiquing 1,000s of personal profile pages.  But here’s what I’ll do.

I’ll let you give your referrals private access to a special seminar on How to Write More Effectively. How does that sound?

Already a Member of SWOM?

If you’re already a member and feel a bit disappointed for missing this copywriting critique deal,  I’m pondering how to offer writing training to other SWOM Gold members.

Please tell me if you’re interested in tweaking your personal profile and gaining more influence (and more money… lol) on SWOM.com. Just drop a comment into space below…  I’m interested in hearing your ideas.

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